For this weeks literacy, room 3 did a checkpoint ( where we see where we can improve and fix our learning) This helps us get better at literacy so we can go to higher levels, It is important we do this so we know that we aren't over/underworking ourselves. Here's my work!
HI Shyla- you have blitzed through this task and created a fantastic reflection of your writing sample. I think you could give yourself more credit for the things you are doing well in writing you need to recraft. I noticed that in that paragraph, you've shown that you can use commas, apostrophes and exclamation marks correctly. You have also included a complex sentence, which indicates you are practising your new learning- Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking on the feedback about this post as we discussed. I hope you are happy with the changes you made- BRILLIANT!
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