Great use of rhyming Shyla - that is very creative! I love the phrase 'sinister blood thirsty teeth' - I imagine an evil creature with blood coming out of its mouth. Great use of vocabulary in this poem also - it makes for very interesting reading. Ka pai! - Mrs T
Great use of rhyming Shyla - that is very creative! I love the phrase 'sinister blood thirsty teeth' - I imagine an evil creature with blood coming out of its mouth. Great use of vocabulary in this poem also - it makes for very interesting reading. Ka pai! - Mrs T
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